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Coco le Posted 11 years ago
Vocabulary

are these errors?

For this debate, some opinions are even for closing_ those factories such as oil, mine, concrete and so on_.
...in which the emission of air pollutants is not avoidable during the industry process.
  

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For this debate, some opinions are even for closing those factories such as oil, mine, concrete and so on . words in italics

  • For this debate, some opinions are even for closing those factories such as oil, mine, concrete and so on .
  • words in italics
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For this debate, some opinions are even for closingthose factories such as oil, mine, concrete and so on.

words in italics
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I feel confused by "such as " and "the industry process". I don't think they are right or proper expressions that the writer intends. However, I would like to hear what English natives make of them. ps: These sentences are extracted from an EFL learner's writing, though I am one of them too.

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