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Cboutin3 Posted 12 years ago
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Are these couple sentences worded in the proper way?

FYI- Cephas is Marod's son. In the ensuing panic and chaos of the falling palace, Corvus, Cynda, Shan, and Tobin were able to escape. The four were reunited with Cephas and Ariella after the manor fell and destroyed the arena. In the ruins of the arena, Cephas faced Marod in single combat, and he swiftly killed his father. After leaving Calimport, the companions traveled back to the Island of the Free in order to end the slavery on the earthmote. Cephas confronted, but did not kill, Azad, who explained how he had been tricked into killing Valandra.
  

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cboutin3 Cephas faced Marod in single combat, and he swiftly killed his father How about: Cephas faced his father Marod in single combat and swiftly killed him.

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  • cboutin3 Cephas faced Marod in single combat, and he swiftly killed his father How about: Cephas faced his father Marod in single combat and swiftly killed him.
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cboutin3Cephas faced Marod in single combat, and he swiftly killed his father
How about: Cephas faced his father Marod in single combat and swiftly killed him.
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Hola!
How about this to make it a bit more interesting:

FYI-Cephas is Marod's son. In the ensuing panic and chaos of the falling palace, Corvus, Cynda, Shan, and Tobin were able to escape. After the manor fell and destroyed the arena, the four were reunited. In the ruins of the arena, Cephas faced Marod in single combat. He swiftly killed his father and left Calimport. In order
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