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Cboutin3 Posted 12 years ago
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Zinnirit dispelled the magic bonding that tied Danifae to Halisstra, making Danifae a free drow once more. Danifae then killed Zinnirit and stole his ring of teleportation, as well as took control of the transportation portals that the mage had in his possession
  

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cboutin3 as well as and took control of the transportation portals that the mage had in his possession as well

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cboutin3 as well as and took control of the transportation portals that the mage had in his possession as well
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