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Short description
Pandian, the son of a cop and a wannabe rowdy, falls in love with Kadhambari, a hearing-impaired girl, who wants him to take on Killivalavan, a gangster-politician who has murdered her parents.

Long description
Pandian, son of a lady inspector in Pondicherry is a wannabe rowdy whose life-time ambition is to become a fearsome don but his mom wants him to join the police force. He falls for the hearing impaired Kadhambari and tries to accomplish her request to take on the dreaded don, Killivalavan, a local rowdy with powerful political connections who has murdered her parents.