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Anonymous Posted 11 years ago
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are these correct?

Vitek, a leading European brand, presents climate control range of air coolers

Versatile, stylist and easy-to-move climate control range of air coolers

Enjoy cool breezes even during the hottest month
Vitek presents climate control range of air coolers

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I would re-organize these sentences to make them clearer. Vitek, a leading European brand, offers a range of air coolers to control the climate. Versatile, stylish , and easy-to-move range of climate-control air coolers .

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  • I would re-organize these sentences to make them clearer.
  • Vitek, a leading European brand, offers a range of air coolers to control the climate.
  • Versatile, stylish , and easy-to-move range of climate-control air coolers .
  • (Not a sentence) .
  • Enjoy cool breezes even during the hottest month.
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I would re-organize these sentences to make them clearer.

Vitek, a leading European brand, offers a range of air coolers to control the climate.

Versatile, stylish, and easy-to-move range of climate-control air coolers. (Not a sentence).

Enjoy cool breezes even during the hottest month. (okay)
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