are these correct ??

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1. The shrimp brings wealthy to coastal princes
2. Tico washing powder is sold well in domestic market
3. Vietnam and Nhat Ban sign the agreement each other of cultural exchange
4. calling for drug investigation in students
5. Price in Ho Chi Minh market
6. Boosting reafforestration in Southern provinces

thanks so much

GPY · Accepted Answer

Are all these supposed to be complete sentences?

Tensaiem · Answer

no, as long as it has meaning and correct grammar!!

tks

GPY · Answer

I have highlighted some mistakes:

1. The shrimp brings wealthy to coastal princes

2. Tico washing powder is sold well in domestic market
An article may also be needed in front of "domestic market", unless it is an abbreviated style (e.g. used in headlines).

3. Vietnam and Nhat Ban sign the agreement each other of cultural exchange
I gather (correct me if I am wrong) that "Nhat Ban" is the Vietnamese name for Japan. When writing in English you should nomally use the English name.

The sequences of words in 4, 5, and 6 could validly occur within a sentence, but it is hard to judge them without seeing the whole sentence. The fragments are not necessarily broken on obvious phrase boundaries (e.g. 4), which does not help. It is not very clear whether a capital letter means the start of a sentence, or whether the capitalisation is random. 5 would normally have an article (or other determiner) before "price". It is not clear that "in" is the best preposition in 4.

Tensaiem · Answer

let see that I correct below:

1. shrimps bring properties to coastal provinces

2. Tico detergent sell wells on home market

3. you are right . nhat ban is the Vietnamese name for Japan

Vietnam and Japan sign cultural exchange agreements.

i am practicing newspaper titles. it is not necessarily write complete setences, sometimes phrases.

4. call for stide my drug investigation

5. quotations from Ho Chi Minh market

i replaced the preposition 'in' by 'from'.

yes, thanks to review and let me know if they are correct

Tensaiem · Answer

really thanks for your replies

GPY · Answer

tensaiemi am practicing newspaper titles.

This is important information. If you post any more in future threads, I recommend that you make this clear from the outset.

All your headlines should start with a capital letter.

1. Shrimps bring properties to coastal provinces
This is not definitely wrong, but "properties" may not be the best word. "development" might be better.

2. Tico detergent sell wells on home market
OK.

3. Vietnam and Japan sign cultural exchange agreements
OK.

4. call for stide my drug investigation
Doesn't make any sense.

5. Quotations from Ho Chi Minh market
This is correctly formed English. More background information is needed in order to determine whether it is the normal way of expressing what you mean.

are these correct ??

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