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Cboutin3 Posted 12 years ago
Grammar

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Linsha then received word that the dragon eggs had been returned to the cavern nest, and she decided to retrieve them with Lanther and a small band of warriors. However, it was a trap: they were ambushed in the labyrinth and captured by the Tarmaks.
  

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I like it. Others may prefer a comma ... trap, as they were...

  • I like it.
  • Others may prefer a comma ...
  • trap, as they were...
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I like it. Others may prefer a comma ...trap, as they were...

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