Are these ALTERNATIVES O.K.?

0Are they 00grammatically OK, would You add something into these?02br
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00THINGS CAN'T REMAIN AS THEY WERE BEFORE02br
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00THINGS CAN'T REMAIN AS THEY'VE BEEN ANYMORE02br
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00BUT THE PEOPLE THAT LIVE THERE YOU COULDN'T POSSIBLY UNDERSTAND 02br
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00BUT THE PEOPLE WHO LIVE THERE YOU COULDN'T POSSIBLY BEGIN TO UNDERSTAND02br
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00YOU ARE AN IMPERTURBABLE [SPOKOJNY; NIEWZRUSZONY] MAN02br
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00YOU ARE A DIFFICULT MAN TO BREAK02br
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00I'VE ALREADY SAID WHAT'S NECESSARY TO BE SAID02br
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00I'VE ALREADY LECTURED TO YOU ABOUT EVERYTHING THAT I SHOULD HAVE02br
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00...NOW THE REST IS UP TO YOU 05002br
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00YOU DON'T UNDERSTAND AT ALL02br
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00YOU DON'T HAVE ANY UNDERSTANDING02br
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00MAY I SEE IT?02br
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00MAY I (PLEASE) BE ALLOWED TO SEE IT?02br
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00CIEKAWA FRAZA - YOU SHOULD LIVE WHAT YOU BELIEVE02br
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00WHO ARE THESE FOR? – DLA KOGO TO? [WHOSE IS IT? – CZYJE TO?]02br
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00[CZYJE TO SĄ PIENIĄDZE? - WHOSE MONEY IS THIS? / CZYJEMU SŁOWU UFASZ? - WHOSE WORD DO YOU TRUST?]02br
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00I GUESS WE MANAGED TO SURVIVE02br
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00I GUESS WE MANAGED TO GET OUT OF IT ALIVE.02br
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00YOU'RE SO CRUEL02br
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00YOU'RE BEING MEAN02br
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00I CAME HERE TO HAVE MY TOY RETURNED TO ME02br
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00I HAVE COME TO HAVE MY TOY RETURNED02br
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00THERE'S NO USE IN BEING AFRAID. IT'S ALREADY BEEN DECIDED.02br
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00THERE'S NO USE BEING AFRAID. IT'S ALREADY DECIDED.02br
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00WE NO LONGER NEED IT02br
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00WE NO LONGER HAVE NEED OF IT010id1