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Ackal V ordered the First Fifty of the Great Horde, under the command of General Lord Relfas, to destroy the bakali. These fifty thousand warriors were the first to be summoned into battle during times of war, and were the finest of Ackal V’s fighting men, with none of them being younger than twenty or older than thirty. Relfas brought his army in a rush to contest the invaders’ crossing of the Solvin River, some twenty leagues east-northeast of Caergoth. When Relfas then received word that the bakali army was retreating, he immediately ordered his forces to charge the fleeing enemy. However, this withdrawal was only a ploy by the bakali, and when the Ergothians were charging up the Solvin Hills, fifty thousand of the lizard-men attacked them.
  

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Ackal V ordered the First Fifty of the Great Horde, under General Lord Relfas, to destroy the bakali. These warriors were the first to be summoned into battle during times of war, and were the finest of Ackal V’s fighting men, all between twenty and thirty. Relfas rushed his army to contest the invaders’ crossing of the Solvin River, twenty leagues east-northeast of Caergoth.

  • Ackal V ordered the First Fifty of the Great Horde, under General Lord Relfas, to destroy the bakali.
  • These warriors were the first to be summoned into battle during times of war, and were the finest of Ackal V’s fighting men, all between twenty and thirty.
  • Relfas rushed his army to contest the invaders’ crossing of the Solvin River, twenty leagues east-northeast of Caergoth.
  • When Relfas received word that the bakali army was retreating, he ordered his forces to charge the fleeing enemy.
  • However, this withdrawal was only a bakaki ploy and when the Ergothians charged up the Solvin Hills, fifty thousand lizard-men counter-attacked.
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Ackal V ordered the First Fifty of the Great Horde, under General Lord Relfas, to destroy the bakali. These warriors were the first to be summoned into battle during times of war, and were the finest of Ackal V’s fighting men, all between twenty and thirty. Relfas rushed his army to contest the invaders’ crossing of the Solvin River, twenty leagues east-northeast of Caergoth. When Relfas receiv

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