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Anonymous Posted 10 years ago
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Are these 2 sentences correct please?

Are these 2 sentences correct?

We will make a rough plan of which sites/places we want to be photographed at.
How long time in advance do you need feedback to book the driver?

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The first sentence makes sense - you want to be photographed at some particular places and you are letting them know where those will be, approximately. to be photographed at'. '.

— David Hatton

  • The first sentence makes sense - you want to be photographed at some particular places and you are letting them know where those will be, approximately.
  • to be photographed at'.
  • '.
  • However, 'feedback' is a response to a job or service carried out so seems wrong in this sentence.
  • I imagine what you mean is that you want to know by what time you will need to let them know about booking the driver.
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The first sentence makes sense - you want to be photographed at some particular places and you are letting them know where those will be, approximately. If you want to take photographs of the places, rather than you AT the places, use '...to photograph' rather than '...to be photographed at'.

The second sentence is a bit odd; 'How long in advance...' is not bad without 'time' added in, a
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AnonymousAre these 2 two sentences correct?
Not completely.

We'll make a rough plan of where we want to be photographed.
How much advance notice do you need to book the driver?

CJ
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