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Anonymous Posted 13 years ago
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Are these 2 sentences correct?

Could someone tell me if there is anything to change in the sentences?

Sorry, but we can't help but feel disgusted by the level of immaturity you have portrayed from this reply.

In a nutshell, you've pointed to my lack of attention and lack of immaturity while I've point to your lack of attention and coherence.

Thank you
  

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It's hard to tell what you mean, and the tone seems petulant. If you intend to put these sentences in a message to someone, I suggest you think twice before doing so. Anonymous Sorry, but we can't help but feel disgusted by the level of immaturity you have portrayed from this reply.

  • It's hard to tell what you mean, and the tone seems petulant.
  • If you intend to put these sentences in a message to someone, I suggest you think twice before doing so.
  • Anonymous Sorry, but we can't help but feel disgusted by the level of immaturity you have portrayed from this reply.
  • " Again, I'm not sure what you're trying to say.
  • Anonymous In a nutshell, you've pointed to my lack of attention and lack of immaturity while I've point to your lack of attention and coherence.
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It's hard to tell what you mean, and the tone seems petulant. If you intend to put these sentences in a message to someone, I suggest you think twice before doing so.
AnonymousSorry, but we can't help but feel disgusted by the level of immaturity you have portrayed from this reply.
Maybe "Sorry, but we can't help but feel disgusted by the level of immaturity you
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This is an email, the person pointed to my lack of immaturity and I wanted to point to her lack of coherence.

The sentence reads:You've pointed to my lack of attention and lack of immaturity while I've point to your lack of attention and coherence.

Is 'while the word to use?

In the email, there was a sentence:
Who says the picture are out of focus. Just b
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Anonymoushis is an email, the person pointed to my lack of immaturity and I wanted to point to her lack of coherence.The sentence reads:You've pointed to my lack of attention and lack of immaturity while I've point to your lack of attention and coherence.Is 'while the word to use?
I guess you mean "maturity". "You've pointed out

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