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Lmoon Posted 16 years ago
Grammar

Are there to many commas in this sentence?

Additionally, the qualifications and backgrounds of the individuals, including their knowledge of the fisheries and issues confronting the Councils, is a very important factor that we take into consideration.
  

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Hi and welcome to English Forums. No, there are the right number of commas. However, you needed "too" instead of "to" in your question, and "qualifications and backgrounds" requires the plural.

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  • No, there are the right number of commas.
  • However, you needed "too" instead of "to" in your question, and "qualifications and backgrounds" requires the plural.
  • "...
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Hi and welcome to English Forums.

No, there are the right number of commas.

However, you needed "too" instead of "to" in your question, and "qualifications and backgrounds" requires the plural. "... are important factors..."

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