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Anonymous Posted 11 years ago
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I have just been learning English. The below paragraph is my practise exercise. Please help me if you see any mistake
"I always go back to my country in the day off. I get up at 7 o'clock. Then, I have breakfast while I am watching the morning news.
After that, I am self-study in English and Japanese. I learn in 4 hours. At 12 a.m my family have lunch and take a nap then.
3 pm I play with some children. They are so beautiful and always obey me. Sometimes, they sing and dance. Look so cute!
At night, I hang out with my high school friends. We go to the beer club. Drinking some beer, going home at 1a.m"
"I always go back to my country in the day off. I get up at 7 o'clock. Then, I have breakfast while I am watching the morning news.
After that, I am self-study in English and Japanese. I learn in 4 hours. At 12 a.m my family have lunch and take a nap then.
3 pm I play with some children. They are so beautiful and always obey me. Sometimes, they sing and dance. Look so cute!
At night, I hang out with my high school friends. We go to the beer club. Drinking some beer, going home at 1a.m"
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I always go back to my country in the spend my day off at home . I get up at 7 o'clock. Then, I have breakfast while I am watching the morning news.
- I always go back to my country in the spend my day off at home .
- I get up at 7 o'clock.
- Then, I have breakfast while I am watching the morning news.
- After that, I am self- study in some English and Japanese .
- I learn in for about 4 hours.
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I always go back to my country in the spend my day off at home. I get up at 7 o'clock. Then, I have breakfast while I am watching the morning news. After that, I am self- study in some English and Japanese . I learn in for about 4 hours. At 12 a.m noon, my family have lunch and take a nap afterwards.
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