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Shasam Posted 21 years ago
Grammar
Are there any more errors ?pls help!!!
G (grammar) SP( spelling) T (TENSES) P (punctuation) PR( preposition)WO (word order) V ( vocabulary)
I am 46 years old and married for twenty years .We have got three children,one soon and two daughters .There are
six, eight and eleven years old.I am an electrical engineer and worked for a company who manufactured machines for procession
automatically.
At first, I am going to learn English in Great Britain.It's very important for my job.Then, I would like to have a little compagniy with
about ten coworker for myself.If it isn't possible,i'll manage a department who developed high technology machines.
I became the test sheets for complete and return directly at you .You phoned at your agent about my course at your school in
Bristol.Very thanks for your trouble .I'm happy to come at your school and i'm sure to learn better English.I don't know my flight
numberon 5st March.I would let you as soon as possible.
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soon-son(sp),there-they(Sp).,electricalengineer(Electrical Engineer) (P),worked-work(T),who-which(G),manufactured-manufactures (T),to have-to open (V) compagniy(SP),coworker-coworkers(G),whowhich (G)developed develops(T),very thanks-thank you very much (WO),come at -come to(P) 5st-5th(G) let you as soon-let you know as soon....
I have corrected what i know and i'm not sure how to correct the sentences -,I became the test sheets for complete and return directly at you.You phoned at your agent about my course at your school in Bristol.
Are my other corrections o.k. help please!!!!!
I am 46 years old and married for twenty years .We have got three children,one soon and two daughters .There are
six, eight and eleven years old.I am an electrical engineer and worked for a company who manufactured machines for procession
automatically.
At first, I am going to learn English in Great Britain.It's very important for my job.Then, I would like to have a little compagniy with
about ten coworker for myself.If it isn't possible,i'll manage a department who developed high technology machines.
I became the test sheets for complete and return directly at you .You phoned at your agent about my course at your school in
Bristol.Very thanks for your trouble .I'm happy to come at your school and i'm sure to learn better English.I don't know my flight
numberon 5st March.I would let you as soon as possible.
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soon-son(sp),there-they(Sp).,electricalengineer(Electrical Engineer) (P),worked-work(T),who-which(G),manufactured-manufactures (T),to have-to open (V) compagniy(SP),coworker-coworkers(G),who
I have corrected what i know and i'm not sure how to correct the sentences -,I became the test sheets for complete and return directly at you.You phoned at your agent about my course at your school in Bristol.
Are my other corrections o.k. help please!!!!!
Top answer
Hello Shasam I think your correction is almost perfect. I tried to rewrite it as below, but please don’t believe it is a good English because I too am a mere English learner at a beginner's level. Please wait until some native speaker puts a better correction.
- Hello Shasam I think your correction is almost perfect.
- I tried to rewrite it as below, but please don’t believe it is a good English because I too am a mere English learner at a beginner's level.
- Please wait until some native speaker puts a better correction.
- I am 46 years old and married for twenty years.
- We have three children; one son and two daughters.
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Hello Shasam
I think your correction is almost perfect. I tried to rewrite it as below, but please don’t believe it is a good English because I too am a mere English learner at a beginner's level. Please wait until some native speaker puts a better correction.
I am 46 years old and married for twenty years. We have three children; one son and two daughters.
I think your correction is almost perfect. I tried to rewrite it as below, but please don’t believe it is a good English because I too am a mere English learner at a beginner's level. Please wait until some native speaker puts a better correction.
I am 46 years old and married for twenty years. We have three children; one son and two daughters.
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Paco,
You certainly are more than a beginner, and you have a command of grammatical understanding that it's too late in life for me to acquire.
But I will offer a couple of changes to your excellent revision, based on my simple credentials as a native speaker:
I am 46 years old and have been married for twenty years. We have
You certainly are more than a beginner, and you have a command of grammatical understanding that it's too late in life for me to acquire.
But I will offer a couple of changes to your excellent revision, based on my simple credentials as a native speaker:
I am 46 years old and have been married for twenty years. We have
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Hello Dave
Thank you for the correction. Reading yours, I thought I'm still too poor at writing English.
paco
Thank you for the correction. Reading yours, I thought I'm still too poor at writing English.
paco
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Hey Paco, just wait until somebody corrects mine.
Try reading some of my Japanese some day.. (All I learned was from reading Shogun 25 years ago, and watching Kurosawa and Ozu films.)
Try reading some of my Japanese some day.. (All I learned was from reading Shogun 25 years ago, and watching Kurosawa and Ozu films.)
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