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Anonymous Posted 10 years ago
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Are there any mistakes in these two sentences?
Hi, could you please let me know if there are any mistakes in the following:
He begins training and rapidly develops powers, outshining the abilities of the most experienced guardians. Yet he struggles to accept the responsibilities thrust upon him: to locate the founder of their order , and assist in winning the ongoing battle. Thanks a lot!
He begins training and rapidly develops powers, outshining the abilities of the most experienced guardians. Yet he struggles to accept the responsibilities thrust upon him: to locate the founder of their order , and assist in winning the ongoing battle. Thanks a lot!
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" Otherwise, your sentences are good.
- " Otherwise, your sentences are good.
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Remove the comma after "order." Otherwise, your sentences are good.
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