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Nikolas Posted 15 years ago
Grammar

Are there any mistakes in these sentences?

Please, could you check the sentences for mistakes and advice how to make them sound native?:

Selected image will appear as a logo for the present webinar in the schedule.

In case no image has been selected, your profile picture will be displayed as a webinar logo.

(see the picture atached)


Thanx!
  

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Well, I think your sentence will do with a few amendments. Since a user, I suppose, participates in a webinar, the picture they either selected or dismissed will be logo no matter what a schedule is. That's why "in the schedule" (which should be "according to the schedule") is redundant.

— Fandorin

  • Well, I think your sentence will do with a few amendments.
  • Since a user, I suppose, participates in a webinar, the picture they either selected or dismissed will be logo no matter what a schedule is.
  • That's why "in the schedule" (which should be "according to the schedule") is redundant.
  • Nikolas Selected image will appear as a logo in the webinar.
  • In case no image has been selected, your profile picture will be displayed as a webinar logo.
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Well, I think your sentence will do with a few amendments. Since a user, I suppose, participates in a webinar, the picture they either selected or dismissed will be logo no matter what a schedule is. That's why "in the schedule" (which should be "according to the schedule") is redundant.
NikolasSelected image will appear as a logo in the webinar.
In case no image has b
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A logo is more of a commercial trade mark, like the big Yellow M of Mc Donnald. I don't think that's the case here. When you said "selected image" do you mean avatar ?
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thanks a lot for your comments


2 Fandorin
There will be a webinar schedule, to get the idea how it looks, please visit http://webinar.onwebinar.com/ (this is program module that i'm translating now). The images that you see are webinars' logos and appear only in schedule. But i agree with fandorin that the
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You are right. I supposed it was the way the sentence was worded that made me think that way.

<<<2 dimsumexpress
Avatar i guess is the word, but i'm a bit confused as it is supposed to represent a person, not a webinar. Or am I wrong?>>>
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You can upload an image for the webinar. If you do not, the icon for that session will be displayed instead.
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