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Nalini Rajeev Posted 9 years ago
Grammar
Are there any errors in this paragraph?
Its a paragraph from my fictional story:
It was 7:45 am in the morning when life was just starting to get better. The foggy yet perfect weather made my day.
Looking out of the window, taking a sip by sip of the not chocolate, a waitress came up to my table with the receipt.
It was 7:45 am in the morning when life was just starting to get better. The foggy yet perfect weather made my day.
Looking out of the window, taking a sip by sip of the not chocolate, a waitress came up to my table with the receipt.
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" and "in the morning" They mean the same thing. " 3) I was looking out of the window, drinking hot chocolate, sip by sip, when a waitress came up to my table with the receipt. 4) Is the waitress bringing a "receipt" or a "bill"?
- " and "in the morning" They mean the same thing.
- " 3) I was looking out of the window, drinking hot chocolate, sip by sip, when a waitress came up to my table with the receipt.
- 4) Is the waitress bringing a "receipt" or a "bill"?
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1) It is unnecessary to use both "a.m." and "in the morning" They mean the same thing.
2) Add commas: " ...foggy, yet perfect, weather..."
3) I was looking out of the window, drinking hot chocolate, sip by sip, when a waitress came up to my table with the receipt.
4) Is the waitress bringing a "receipt" or a "bill"?
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