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Wangqh2696122 Posted 14 years ago
Grammar

Are there any errors in the sentences?

The judges made their final decisions and announced that I had won first prize. The audience were going wild clapping and cheering! I was extremely happy. It was so exciting a moment that I will always remember.I think there are two errors in the paragraph:a) decisions should be decision;b) remember should take “it” as its object.Am I right?
  

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This is what needs to be done: The judges made their decision and announced that I had won first prize. The audience went wild , clapping and cheering . I was extremely happy.

  • This is what needs to be done: The judges made their decision and announced that I had won first prize.
  • The audience went wild , clapping and cheering .
  • I was extremely happy.
  • It was an exciting moment that I will always remember.
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This is what needs to be done:

The judges made their decision and announced that I had won first prize. The audience went wild, clapping and cheering. I was extremely happy. It was an exciting moment that I will always remember.

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