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Ayan86 Posted 10 years ago
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Are the underlined words fine?

Hi there!
I am not sure about the choice of words in the underlined part... Could you please take a look? Does it feel natural?

Media Association XXX, on the eve of an annual advertising time sales campaign, hereby invites you to attend cocktail evening for agencies and clients.

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ayan86 advertising time sales Too many words there; there must be hefty overlap. *** Media Association, on the eve of its annual advertising campaign , hereby invites you to attend a cocktail evening for agents and clients .

  • ayan86 advertising time sales Too many words there; there must be hefty overlap.
  • *** Media Association, on the eve of its annual advertising campaign , hereby invites you to attend a cocktail evening for agents and clients .
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ayan86 advertising time sales
Too many words there; there must be hefty overlap.


*** Media Association, on the eve of its annual advertising campaign, hereby invites you to attend a cocktail evening for agents and clients.

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