Are the underlined 'many other' and 'you' correctly used in the sentences?
I think those persons who say that goblins exist are right. Yes, there are probably goblins and similar things that only paranormal experts can explain. I half believe, however, that goblins are real. Who can tell? “To see is to believe,” many other people say. You must, however, believe in someone who believes in you, too.
Who are the people who are not "other people"? That's not clear to me. Your use of 'you' seems OK to me.
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Who are the people who are not "other people"? That's not clear to me.
Your use of 'you' seems OK to me.