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Cboutin3 Posted 12 years ago
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Are the two parts of this sentence correct or should I rephrase it?
Hult used Shedara’s magic to infiltrate the camp of the Black Tongue tribe in order to discover the reason why the hobgoblins were gathering and was able to kill their chieftain.
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I would say it this way: Hult used Shedara’s magic to infiltrate the Black Tongue tribe's camp to find out why the hobgoblins were gathering, and (eventually) was able to kill their chieftain.
- I would say it this way: Hult used Shedara’s magic to infiltrate the Black Tongue tribe's camp to find out why the hobgoblins were gathering, and (eventually) was able to kill their chieftain.
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I would say it this way:
Hult used Shedara’s magic to infiltrate the Black Tongue tribe's camp to find out why the hobgoblins were gathering, and (eventually) was able to kill their chieftain.
Hult used Shedara’s magic to infiltrate the Black Tongue tribe's camp to find out why the hobgoblins were gathering, and (eventually) was able to kill their chieftain.
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