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Pupil Posted 9 years ago
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Twenty eight-year-old woman broke up with her guy and decided to move to Panama. She ate up all the money earned during their joint living in order not to share with the ex-boyfriend. Eventually, the woman got to the hospital where the doctors removed the notes. Only 5700 dollars were in good condition, the rest of the notes became useless.

  

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pupil Twenty eight-year-old woman broke up with her guy and decided to move to Panama. She ate up all the money earned during their joint living in order not to share with the ex-boyfriend. Eventually, the woman got to the hospital where the doctors removed the notes.

  • pupil Twenty eight-year-old woman broke up with her guy and decided to move to Panama.
  • She ate up all the money earned during their joint living in order not to share with the ex-boyfriend.
  • Eventually, the woman got to the hospital where the doctors removed the notes.
  • Only 5700 dollars were in good condition, the rest of the notes became useless.
  • ] broke up with her partner and decided to move to Panama.
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Twenty eight-year-old woman broke up with her guy and decided to move to Panama. She ate up all the money earned during their joint living in order not to share with the ex-boyfriend. Eventually, the woman got to the hospital where the doctors removed the notes. Only 5700 dollars were in good condition, the rest of the notes became useless.

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