Hi teachers. Are the sentences in bold phrased okay? If not, how would you write them? Thank you.
Voice: Leave our village!
The soldier turns the villagers and glares at them.
Soldier: Who said that?
The crowd of villagers parts to leave Abeeku stand alone. The soldier's eyes soften as he sees him.
Soldier: How old are you?
Abeeku: Ten.
' In the bold sentence, you need '... ' Dave
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Hi
In the second sentence, you need 'The soldier turns to the villagers ...'
In the bold sentence, you need '... to leave Abeeku standing alone.'
Dave
Voice: Leave our village!
The soldier turns to the villagers and glares at them.
Soldier: Who said that?
The crowd of villagers parts to leave Abeeku standing alone. The soldier's eyes soften as he sees him.
Soldier: How old are you?
Abeeku: Ten.