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Anonymous Posted 5 years ago
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Are the sentences in bold phrased okay?

Hi teachers. Are the sentences in bold phrased okay? If not, how would you write them? Thank you.


Voice: Leave our village!

The soldier turns the villagers and glares at them.

Soldier: Who said that?

The crowd of villagers parts to leave Abeeku stand alone. The soldier's eyes soften as he sees him.

Soldier: How old are you?

Abeeku: Ten.

  

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Hi

In the second sentence, you need 'The soldier turns to the villagers ...'

In the bold sentence, you need '... to leave Abeeku standing alone.'

Dave

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Voice: Leave our village!

The soldier turns to the villagers and glares at them.

Soldier: Who said that?

The crowd of villagers parts to leave Abeeku standing alone. The soldier's eyes soften as he sees him.

Soldier: How old are you?

Abeeku: Ten.

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