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Tamguatlay Posted 13 years ago
Grammar

Are the sentences correctly joined?

Victor was down with fever. He missed his soccer practice.

The above is a test on synthesis of sentences.

I have joined the sentences as follows. The sentence has to end with as a result. .Are the sentences correctly joined? Thanks.

Victor was down with fever and he missed the soccer practice as a result.

  

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tamguatlay Victor was down with fever , and he missed his soccer practice as a result. I would add the comma as shown. ) Otherwise, correct.

  • tamguatlay Victor was down with fever , and he missed his soccer practice as a result.
  • I would add the comma as shown.
  • ) Otherwise, correct.
  • CJ
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tamguatlayVictor was down with fever, and he missed his soccer practice as a result.
I would add the comma as shown. (You changed his to the.) Otherwise, correct.

CJ

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