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Bunmeikaika Posted 9 years ago
Grammar

Are the sentences below grammatically correct?

When milk is sterilized with heat, the oxygen in milk oxidizes milk.

When milk is oxdized, it tastes bad, so if the oxygen is removed before sterilizing milk,
the milk tastes better.

The oxygen in A MLIK is removed before sterilizing milk, but the oxygen in B MILK is not.
So A MILK tastes better than B MILK.

That is the diffrence between them.

  

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The sentences below are correct grammar, but the frequent repetition of the word 'milk' is unnatural and will sound silly to native speakers. Can you think of ways to reduce the repetition? eg by using the pronoun 'it'.

  • The sentences below are correct grammar, but the frequent repetition of the word 'milk' is unnatural and will sound silly to native speakers.
  • Can you think of ways to reduce the repetition?
  • eg by using the pronoun 'it'.
  • When milk is sterilized with heat, the oxygen in milk oxidizes milk.
  • When milk is oxidized , it tastes bad so if the oxygen is removed before sterilizing milk, the milk tastes better.
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The sentences below are correct grammar, but the frequent repetition of the word 'milk' is unnatural and will sound silly to native speakers.

Can you think of ways to reduce the repetition? eg by using the pronoun 'it'.

When milk is sterilized with heat, the oxygen in milk oxidizes milk.
When milk is oxidized, it tastes bad so if the oxygen is removed before sterilizin
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