What I tried to say in the 3th and 4th sentence are
3. Sometimes when children make some mistakes, parents might scold them. However, this might not a good way. We should teach them by doing things to show them.
4. When children make some mistakes, parents might give physical punishments. However, this might not a good way. We should try to do something else(loving education) i
3. Sometimes when children make mistakes, parents might scold them. However, this might not a good way to correct them. We should teach them by example instead.
4. When children make mistakes, parents might give physical punishments. However, this might not be a good way t