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Anonymous Posted 12 years ago
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Are the commas in this sentence properly placed?

In the advertisements by Beckham, Armani, and Versace, women are leaning into men, with their bodies touching and their eyes are closed, to suggest arousal.
  

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Yes. In the advertisements by Beckham, Armani, and Versace, women are leaning into men, with their bodies touching and their eyes closed, to suggest arousal. It's not totally clear who the two their s refer to.

— Clive

  • Yes.
  • In the advertisements by Beckham, Armani, and Versace, women are leaning into men, with their bodies touching and their eyes closed, to suggest arousal.
  • It's not totally clear who the two their s refer to.
  • Both men and women?
  • Just women?
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Yes.

In the advertisements by Beckham, Armani, and Versace, women are leaning into men, with their bodies touching and their eyes closed, to suggest arousal.

It's not totally clear who the two theirs refer to. Both men and women? Just women?
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