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Anonymous Posted 16 years ago
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Are the commas in this sentance used correctly?

During Kyle’s football recruitment Nelson Stokley, USL’s head football coach, informed Mr. Kipps that Kyle was to play football at USL or choose a football program outside of .
  

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No. You need one more to make it read clearly: During Kyle's football recruitment , Nelson Stokley, USL's head football coach, informed Mr. Kipps that Kyle was to play football at USL or choose a football program outside of Louisiana.

  • No.
  • You need one more to make it read clearly: During Kyle's football recruitment , Nelson Stokley, USL's head football coach, informed Mr.
  • Kipps that Kyle was to play football at USL or choose a football program outside of Louisiana.
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No. You need one more to make it read clearly:

During Kyle's football recruitment, Nelson Stokley, USL's head football coach, informed Mr. Kipps that Kyle was to play football at USL or choose a football program outside of Louisiana.

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