Hi Anon, tenses are OK, but I would place a comma after 'development'.
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AnonymousFurthermore, if Molly would live in USA, that would have a positive effect on her health and mental development as in USA she would have an option to visit necessary doctors and a kindergarten.Furthermore, if Molly would live in the USA, that would have a positive effect on her health and mental development as in the US