Are parents best teachers?

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HiI am preparing the toefl exam, I am trying to  improve my writing skils, I  would appreciate if you can  correct  myessay , Thank youAre parents best teachers? My answers is NO. Learning is very important phase in children life, because it will affect their personalities, futures, and their contributions to the society.First of all, a question is raised if parents could be a good teacher.  We all know that not all parents have owned a college degree, and some of them don’t have the skills and knowledge to teach their children.Secondly, most of parents are full time jobs or having very busy schedule. Even if they have the ability to teach their own children they need to find time to do it. Parents are overwhelmed with their jobs as employees and as parents.All in all, parents play a big role in their children’s education, but nothing can replace the traditional education system, schools and colleges.

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cachmere1987Are parents best teachers?

Are parents the best teachers?

cachmere1987My answers is NO.

My answer is NO.

cachmere1987Learning is very important ~~phase~~ in children life,

Learning is very important in children's lives,

cachmere1987because it will affect their personalities, futures, and their contributions to ~~the~~ society.

because it will affect their personalities, futures, and their contributions to society.

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cachmere1987First of all, a question is raised if parents could be a good teacher.

First of all, a question is raised if parents could be good teachers.

cachmere1987We all know that not all parents have ~~owned~~ a college degree,

We all know that not all parents have a college degree, (In American English. In the English of England, it is called a university degree.)

cachmere1987Secondly, most of parents are full time jobs

Secondly, most parents have full time jobs

cachmere1987or ~~having~~ very busy schedule.

or very busy schedules.

cachmere1987Parents are overwhelmed with their jobs ~~as employees~~ and as parents.

Parents are overwhelmed with their jobs and role as parents.

Being a parent is not a job. It is better to refer to it as a role.

cachmere1987but nothing can replace the traditional education system,

This gives the impression that you are referring to one, traditional education system in particular. If you are not, you should not include the. You should also add s to system to make it systems.

cachmere1987schools and colleges.

You have overlooked the word universities, here. Although the words college and university are synonyms in the USA, they are not so, everywhere in the English-speaking world.

Anonymous · Answer

cachmere1987HiI am preparing the toefl exam, I am trying to improve my writing skils, I would appreciate if you can correct myessay , Thank youAre parents best teachers? My answers is NO. Learning is very important phase in children life, because it will affect their personalities, futures, and their contributions to the society.First of all, a question is raised if parents could be a good teacher. We all know that not all parents have owned a college degree, and some of them don’t have the skills and knowledge to teach their children.Secondly, most of parents are full time jobs or having very busy schedule. Even if they have the ability to teach their own children they need to find time to do it. Parents are overwhelmed with their jobs as employees and as parents.All in all, parents play a big role in their children’s education, but nothing can replace the traditional education system, schools and colleges.

You have not mentioned that some parents do not have a good relationship with their children. This is one reason why they are not good teachers for their children.

Cachmere1987 · Answer

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