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Ztq3 Posted 12 years ago
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Are my sentences correct

I was wondering if you are aware of the new bank accounts for investment and reserve accounts. Were they approved by Jane Doe?

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OK, except it would be good to avoid the repetition of the word 'accounts'.

— Clive

  • OK, except it would be good to avoid the repetition of the word 'accounts'.
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OK, except it would be good to avoid the repetition of the word 'accounts'.
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OK I will remove the last one. Thank you Clive!
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