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Ztq3 Posted 12 years ago
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Are my sentences correct
We have decided not to pursue buying the condo. In our meeting last week, you will return our 100% deposit money if we do not continue buying the condo.
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kolokoy In our meeting last week, you will return This sounds odd. I think this is what you want convey: In our meeting last week, we have decided not to pursue buying the condo. Hence, we would like you to return our deposit money in full.
- kolokoy In our meeting last week, you will return This sounds odd.
- I think this is what you want convey: In our meeting last week, we have decided not to pursue buying the condo.
- Hence, we would like you to return our deposit money in full.
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kolokoyIn our meeting last week, you will returnThis sounds odd.
I think this is what you want convey:
In our meeting last week, we have decided not to pursue buying the condo. Hence, we would like you to return our deposit money in full.
("if we do not continue buying the condo" is not required as you say you have
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Hi kolokoy
I'm sorry there is a mistake in my sentence:
In our meeting last week, we decided (not have decided as time "last week" is mentioned )not to pursue buying the condo. Hence, we would like you to return our deposit money in full.
And a typo: I think this is what you want to convey:
I'm sorry there is a mistake in my sentence:
In our meeting last week, we decided (not have decided as time "last week" is mentioned )not to pursue buying the condo. Hence, we would like you to return our deposit money in full.
And a typo: I think this is what you want to convey:
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