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Anonymous Posted 17 years ago
Grammar

Are my sentences correct?

1.Her home was the exact verison of all the other bungalows white with picket fences.
2. Except, Jessie had her home painted purple. It was known as the Halloween house
on the block.
  

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I"m using some intuition to understand exactly what you want to say. I'd change them thus: Her home was an exact copy of all the other bungalows with white picket fences. Except Jessie had her home painted purple.

  • I"m using some intuition to understand exactly what you want to say.
  • I'd change them thus: Her home was an exact copy of all the other bungalows with white picket fences.
  • Except Jessie had her home painted purple.
  • It was known on the block as the Halloween house.
  • CJ
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I"m using some intuition to understand exactly what you want to say. I'd change them thus:

Her home was an exact copy of all the other bungalows with white picket fences.
Except Jessie had her home painted purple. It was known on the block as the Halloween house.


CJ
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Thank you for the help.

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