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Anonymous Posted 18 years ago
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Are my sentences correct?

Hello, are my sentences below correct?

With a stiff nod she walked out, aware George watched her.
His grin faded, replaced by a worry look.
  

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Hi, are my sentences below correct? With a stiff nod she walked out, aware George watched her. OK, but I'd prefer With a stiff nod she walked out, aware George was watching her.

— Clive

  • Hi, are my sentences below correct?
  • With a stiff nod she walked out, aware George watched her.
  • OK, but I'd prefer With a stiff nod she walked out, aware George was watching her.
  • His grin faded, replaced by a worried worry look.
  • OK Clive
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Hi,
are my sentences below correct?

With a stiff nod she walked out, aware George watched her.
OK, but I'd prefer With a stiff nod she walked out, aware George was watching her.

His grin faded, replaced by a worried worry look. OK

Clive
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