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Pawan24 Posted 16 years ago
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"Life is about living in the moment", this was my first impression when I met Piyush. His triats are not just in giving the best results but in performing the best under stressful situations. Strong analytical skills, adorable personality, lucrative voice and great presentation skills are few of his qualities that make him a true asset for any company.
He is one of those rare people who can input at the micro-level whilst maintaining and promoting a consistent macro-level vision. It was always a pleasure for me to work with Piyush. He was open to suggestion and was very forward thinking in his approach to staffing. He was respectful and professional and always took a strategic approach to his team development. I wish you have a bright future ahead.
  

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I have underlined some problem areas: "Life is about living in the moment ", this was my first impression when I met Piyush. His triats are not just in giving the best results but in performing the best under stressful situations . Strong analytical skills, adorable personality, lucrative voice and great presentation skills are few of his qualities that make him a true asset for any company.

  • I have underlined some problem areas: "Life is about living in the moment ", this was my first impression when I met Piyush.
  • His triats are not just in giving the best results but in performing the best under stressful situations .
  • Strong analytical skills, adorable personality, lucrative voice and great presentation skills are few of his qualities that make him a true asset for any company.
  • He is one of those rare people who can input at the micro-level whilst maintaining and promoting a consistent macro-level vision.
  • It was always a pleasure for me to work with Piyush.
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I have underlined some problem areas:

"Life is about living in the moment", this was my first impression when I met Piyush. His triats are not just in giving the best results but in performing the best under stressful situations. Strong analytical skills, adorable personality, lucrative voice and great presentation skills are fe
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Thank you for replying to my question.I have made amendments in the last draft. Below is the revised draft. Would appreciate your help, if you could answer the questions I have raised in this.

“Life is about living in the moment”, this was my first impression when I met Piyush. His traits, of unwillingness to settle for anything but the best, show his assiduous
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You have changed the text. I have underlined remaining problems:

"Life is about living in the moment": this was my first impression when I met Piyush. His traits, of unwillingness to settle for anything but the best, show his assiduous character. Strong analytical skills, adorable (personality can be attractive, why this is incorrect?-- It is app

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