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Nicetomeetyou Posted 8 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

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Would you please check this interms of grammar and expressions?

We often see aliens as intelligent as, or more intelligent than, us humans in movies and TV programs. I think this is a sign that we expect intelligent life to exit on planets other than our own. However, what interests me is that those aliens are almost always depicted as something evil.

  

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The logic of your second sentence does not follow from your first sentence. I would delete it as indicated: We often see aliens as as intelligent as, or more intelligent tha n, humans in movies and TV programs. I think this is a sign that we expect intelligent life to exist on planets other than our own.

  • The logic of your second sentence does not follow from your first sentence.
  • I would delete it as indicated: We often see aliens as as intelligent as, or more intelligent tha n, humans in movies and TV programs.
  • I think this is a sign that we expect intelligent life to exist on planets other than our own.
  • However, W hat interests me is that those aliens are almost always depicted as evil.
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The logic of your second sentence does not follow from your first sentence. I would delete it as indicated:

We often see aliens as as intelligent as, or more intelligent than, humans in movies and TV programs. I think this is a sign that we expect intelligent life to exist

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