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Anonymous Posted 17 years ago
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Are Commas Needed With These Correlating Conjuntions?

I would appreciate advice on if I need any commas in this sentence. Thank you for your time.

I believe to have a really wonderful time caring for children not only do we need to unconditionally love our kids but we also need to ensure that they are on a natural diet.

Thank you.
  

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I believe that, in order to have a really wonderful time caring for children , not only do we need to unconditionally love our kids , but we also need to ensure that they are on a natural diet.

  • I believe that, in order to have a really wonderful time caring for children , not only do we need to unconditionally love our kids , but we also need to ensure that they are on a natural diet.
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I believe that, in order to have a really wonderful time caring for children, not only do we need to unconditionally love our kids, but we also need to ensure that they are on a natural diet.
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Thank you for your help, Mister Micawber.
I appreciate your help.
Best wishes,
from Anne.

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