Are both OK?

1) Helen gets off the elevator and walks down the hall. She gets to her husband's office and opens the door to find her husband in the middle of a meeting with five Asian business men.

2) Helen gets off the elevator and walks down the hall. She gets to the door to her husband's office and opens it to find her husband in the middle of a meeting with five Asian business men.

-Are both OK?

-Which one do you prefer?

-Could I improve it further?

Thank you.