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Rommel Posted 10 years ago
Grammar

Are ‘at,’ ‘panicking,’ ‘walking in circles,’ ‘brows furrowed,’ and ‘shaking violently’ correctly used in these sentences of mine?

Are ‘at,’ ‘panicking,’ ‘walking in circles,’ ‘brows furrowed,’ and ‘shaking violently’ correctly used in these sentences of mine?

Jake appeared at the door, looking around. He saw his daughter Amy panicking, walking in circles, with her brows furrowed and with her hands sweating and shaking violently.
  

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You have a very nice, correct sentence.

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You have a very nice, correct sentence.
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Rommel her brows furrowed
... her brow... She has only one.
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