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Glaycon Posted 13 years ago
Grammar

Are any of these sentances grammatically correct? If not, how can they be corrected?

On 14 July 2013, A highly regarded professional sprinter, named Andy William, who was looked up to by millions of children, was found guilty today for fraud.

On 14 July 2013, Andy William, a highly regarded professional sprinter, who was looked up to by millions of children, was found guilty today for fraud.
  

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Welcome to the Forums! On 14 July 2013, Andy William, a highly regarded professional sprinter, who was (optional) looked up to by millions of children, was found guilty today of fraud. On 14 July 2013, a highly regarded professional sprinter, (no comma) named Andy William, who was (optional) looked up to by millions of children, was found guilty today of fraud.

  • Welcome to the Forums!
  • On 14 July 2013, Andy William, a highly regarded professional sprinter, who was (optional) looked up to by millions of children, was found guilty today of fraud.
  • On 14 July 2013, a highly regarded professional sprinter, (no comma) named Andy William, who was (optional) looked up to by millions of children, was found guilty today of fraud.
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Welcome to the Forums!

On 14 July 2013, Andy William, a highly regarded professional sprinter, who was (optional) looked up to by millions of children, was found guilty today of fraud.

On 14 July 2013, a highly regarded professional sprinter,(no comma)

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