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Rommel Posted 11 years ago
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Are all these sentences of mine well-written?

Are all these sentences of mine well-written?  

I heard of my parents' plan to transport illegal drugs. I couldn’t take what they had said. I walked away into my room. Mom came in, offering me something to drink. I couldn’t resist, so I drank what she gave me.

What word can I substitute for take? Or do I really have to use another word for it? 
  

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I overheard my parents' plan to transport illegal drugs. I couldn’t tolerate that. I went into my room.

  • I overheard my parents' plan to transport illegal drugs.
  • I couldn’t tolerate that.
  • I went into my room.
  • Mom came in and offered me something to drink.
  • I couldn’t resist, so I drank what she gave me.
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I overheard my parents' plan to transport illegal drugs. I couldn’t tolerate that. I went into my room. Mom came in and offered me something to drink. I couldn’t resist, so I drank what she gave me.

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