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Ayan86 Posted 11 years ago
Grammar
Are 3 "which" in one sentence okay?
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Are 3 "which" in one sentence okay?
It is duty of the employee not to disclose information at his or her disposal which is a commercial secret of the Employer, which has been determined as such according to this agreement and which is not publically available to third parties.
Thank you
Are 3 "which" in one sentence okay?
It is duty of the employee not to disclose information at his or her disposal which is a commercial secret of the Employer, which has been determined as such according to this agreement and which is not publically available to third parties.
Thank you
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Yes it is. It helps make clear the parallel structure (all three phrases modify "information"). However, you could drop the "at his or her disposal" as this adds no useful information.
- Yes it is.
- It helps make clear the parallel structure (all three phrases modify "information").
- However, you could drop the "at his or her disposal" as this adds no useful information.
- It is the duty of the employee not to disclose information which is a commercial secret of the Employer, which has been determined as such according to this agreement, and which is not publicly [ preferred] available to third parties.
- Are you sure that you want to define the protected information in this way?
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Yes it is. It helps make clear the parallel structure (all three phrases modify "information").
However, you could drop the "at his or her disposal" as this adds no useful information.
It is the duty of the employee not to disclose information which is a commercial secret of the Employer, which has been determined as such according to this agreement, and which is not public
However, you could drop the "at his or her disposal" as this adds no useful information.
It is the duty of the employee not to disclose information which is a commercial secret of the Employer, which has been determined as such according to this agreement, and which is not public
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