Hello, everyone,
“When people think about the development of cities, rarely do they consider the critical role of vertical transportation. In fact, each day, more than 7 billion elevator journeys are taken in tall buildings all over the world. Efficient vertical transportation can expand our ability to build taller and taller skyscrapers. Antony Wood, a Professor of Architecture at the Illinois Institute of Technology, explains that advances in elevators over the past 20 years are probably the greatest advances we have seen in tall buildings. For example, elevators in the Jeddah Tower in Jeddah, Saudi Arabia, under construction, will reach a height record of 660m.”
[Q] Which is the better one as the theme for this paragraph?;
1) the influence of elevators on building constructions.
2) the effect of vertical transportation on the expansion of cities.
While I think 2) above is better, your opinion would be much appreciated. If none, please propose a better one.
*source;
In spite of the generality in the first sentence that relates the development of cities to vertical transportation, most of the paragraph is about the fact that new and improved elevator technology enables the construction of taller buildings, so 1) seems closer to the theme of the paragraph. CJ
New words, one handy idiom, and a 2-minute quiz — delivered to your inbox to keep your streak alive.
In spite of the generality in the first sentence that relates the development of cities to vertical transportation, most of the paragraph is about the fact that new and improved elevator technology enables the construction of taller buildings, so 1) seems closer to the theme of the paragraph.
CJ