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Deaki Posted 18 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Appreciate your proofreading on this short writing

This is the part of the article about the school program for which I work.
I will really appreciate if you proofread the writing or add a few sentences.

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Question : The non-formal education programmes implemented in the School
(e.g. Co-curricular Activities, Pupils Development Programmes, Leadership Development Programmes and Value Education Programmes, etc.).

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· Building and Enhancing Self-Confidence Program
: This program targets students who have shown relatively poor performance in terms of school record and who are lack of self-confidence.
Teachers and also some of volunteer graduates engage with two or three students and have a regular meeting after school, focusing on an individual student's needs.
The teachers and the graduates take a role as a mentor and deal with a student's weak area of the school subjects and also give advice on the students' future career.

· Elite Education Program
: While the self-confidence program is for the lower grade students, the elite education program is for top 10 percent of the total students.
The program provides the students with a group study session after school in which the students can benefit one another.
The students also participate an essay class where the students discuss various social issues and write an essay with a guide of a teacher.
With increasing importance on an essay type test of the university entrance exam, the Elite Education Program has seen productive results in recent years.

· Volunteer Work Program
: The school focuses on not only academic abilities but humanity education. Since the school set up sisterhood relationship with the nursing home for disabled people,
in 2006, the school has encouraged students to join volunteer work at the nursing home on a regular basis. This noble service has developed students' a sense of
brotherhood, duties toward mankind and helping motives among people.

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