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SadeqMorshedloo Posted 18 years ago
Letter Writing
Applying for scholar ship
Hi everybody,
I should say this is one of the best websites I have ever encountered in this area.(Learning English).
Well I have written an application letter, but I know there is lots of errors,
so I would be glad if you have look at my essay and give me your comments,
Thank you all of you.
Aug 17 2008
Ms <Name Surname>
Awards and Scholarships Manager
British Council
<Address.>
<City, postal code, State>
Dear Ms. Ahmadi:
I am very interested in British Council, Chevening scholarships or any other financial assistance opportunities available for graduate students.
I have already finished my undergraduate studying in the course of petroleum engineering. I have graduated in Jul 2007 with a grade 17.7 of 20 (excellent) in the Iran university system. My major is Safety and Technical Inspection Engineering. To deepen my knowledge and to specialize in the field of Technical Inspection Engineering, I intend to do my Master of Engineering.
I am currently experiencing an educational period in the field of technical inspection and corrosion prevention at NIOC-OTC (National Iranian Oil Company-Oil Terminal Company) which has started in March 2008 and will last about 16 month. I have also finished two training periods, each of witch last about 2 months at the same company in Jul & Aug 2005 and Jul & Aug 2006.
My career goal is to work in an international company where this Master degree would be helpful. I am interested in traveling and getting to know different cultures and people from various countries around the world.
I am an open-minded and friendly person who is interested in international aspects and intercultural relations. Therefore, I would enjoy studying at UK universities which have a high proportion of international students. It is possible to get to know people from more than one country. Normally, this would require a world tour. Furthermore, I am keen on looking beyond my own nose to learn from other nationalities and cultures. Only personal experience can give you a real view of other cultures and behaviors.
Please send me the appropriate application and deadlines, including any other necessary information I would need to complete a proper application process with Chevening scholarships.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Sincerely,
Sadeq Morshedloo
<contact info>
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<EDITED by mod: please be careful about posting your and others' personal info.>
I should say this is one of the best websites I have ever encountered in this area.(Learning English).
Well I have written an application letter, but I know there is lots of errors,
so I would be glad if you have look at my essay and give me your comments,
Thank you all of you.
Aug 17 2008
Ms <Name Surname>
Awards and Scholarships Manager
British Council
<Address.>
<City, postal code, State>
Dear Ms. Ahmadi:
I am very interested in British Council, Chevening scholarships or any other financial assistance opportunities available for graduate students.
I have already finished my undergraduate studying in the course of petroleum engineering. I have graduated in Jul 2007 with a grade 17.7 of 20 (excellent) in the Iran university system. My major is Safety and Technical Inspection Engineering. To deepen my knowledge and to specialize in the field of Technical Inspection Engineering, I intend to do my Master of Engineering.
I am currently experiencing an educational period in the field of technical inspection and corrosion prevention at NIOC-OTC (National Iranian Oil Company-Oil Terminal Company) which has started in March 2008 and will last about 16 month. I have also finished two training periods, each of witch last about 2 months at the same company in Jul & Aug 2005 and Jul & Aug 2006.
My career goal is to work in an international company where this Master degree would be helpful. I am interested in traveling and getting to know different cultures and people from various countries around the world.
I am an open-minded and friendly person who is interested in international aspects and intercultural relations. Therefore, I would enjoy studying at UK universities which have a high proportion of international students. It is possible to get to know people from more than one country. Normally, this would require a world tour. Furthermore, I am keen on looking beyond my own nose to learn from other nationalities and cultures. Only personal experience can give you a real view of other cultures and behaviors.
Please send me the appropriate application and deadlines, including any other necessary information I would need to complete a proper application process with Chevening scholarships.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Sincerely,
Sadeq Morshedloo
<contact info>
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<EDITED by mod: please be careful about posting your and others' personal info.>
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Guys I need your help, this is so important to me, I would be really thanks full if you had look at this letter, thank you very much
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Guys I need your help, this is so important to me, I would be really thanks full if you had look at this letter,
thank you very much
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