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Safeer Posted 18 years ago
Letter Writing

Apply for the job and HI frm pep***

Respected Sir,

I am Safeer Hamza. P. I am hearing Impaired. I have got 15 years qualifications and one year experience with AutoCAD Map. I would like to apply for a job in your organisation in Bangalore. I need minimum salary Rs 10,000. Please find attached my Curriculum Vitae and Enable India and do the needful. If any news there please inform me by message.

Thanks and Regards

Safeer Hamza
  

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Respected Sir, "Respected Sir" sounds kind of old-fashioned to me. I think "Dear Sir" is sufficient. I am Safeer Hamza.

— Mr Wordy

  • Respected Sir, "Respected Sir" sounds kind of old-fashioned to me.
  • I think "Dear Sir" is sufficient.
  • I am Safeer Hamza.
  • P.
  • The punctuation here looks odd.
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Respected Sir,

"Respected Sir" sounds kind of old-fashioned to me. I think "Dear Sir" is sufficient.

I am Safeer Hamza. P.

The punctuation here looks odd. Is this your full name as you usually write it?

I am hearing impaired.

I wouldn't lead with this. I would put it somewhere later, along with where you men
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