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Anonymous Posted 11 years ago
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Application of leave (approval mail) FOR 12th & 13th NOV,2015

Hi Sir,

I wish to apply for 2 days leave from 12th of Nov 2015 to 13th of Nov 2015. as my family is going to celebrate Diwali at my Brother’s place in Lucknow.
I would like to have your approval on my leave of 2 days. All my responsibilities and the outstanding work will be taken care of by me, before I leave.
Looking forward to a positive reply.
  

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) I wish to apply for 2 days leave , from 12th and 13th of Nov ember 2015 , to 13th of Nov 2015 . as my family is going to celebrate Diwali at my b rother’s place in Lucknow. I would like to have your approval for my leave of 2 days.

  • ) I wish to apply for 2 days leave , from 12th and 13th of Nov ember 2015 , to 13th of Nov 2015 .
  • as my family is going to celebrate Diwali at my b rother’s place in Lucknow.
  • I would like to have your approval for my leave of 2 days.
  • I will take care of a ll my responsibilities and the outstanding work will be taken care of by me, before I leave.
  • Thank you for considering my request.
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Hi Sir, ("Hi" is too informal.)

I wish to apply for 2 days leave, from 12th and 13th of November 2015, to 13th of Nov 2015. as my family is going to celebrate Diwali at my brother’s place in Lucknow.
I would like to have your approval for my leave of 2 days. I will take care of all my
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AlpheccaStarsI would like to have your approval for my leave of 2 days.
This is a bit repetitive. It could be simplified as: I would like to have your approval.

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