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Anonymous Posted 14 years ago
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Application for University of Michigan
Hey guys.. I'm applying for UMich.. would you do me a great favor and just check the two following statements for mistakes?
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1 ) "Both my parents have taken a part of their studies at the Paris Institute of Technology. Their positive experience as well as the reputation of the Institute led me to start my university education here. So far, I absolutely share my parents perfect satifsfaction with teaching quality and support services."
2 ) "when I told my German literature teacher that I enjoyed writing short stories, he first encouraged me to read out my stories in class and finally asked me to participate in the national competition of young writers. His teaching made my submitted short story count among the prize winners."
luv u, thanks
1 ) "Both my parents have taken a part of their studies at the Paris Institute of Technology. Their positive experience as well as the reputation of the Institute led me to start my university education here. So far, I absolutely share my parents perfect satifsfaction with teaching quality and support services."
2 ) "when I told my German literature teacher that I enjoyed writing short stories, he first encouraged me to read out my stories in class and finally asked me to participate in the national competition of young writers. His teaching made my submitted short story count among the prize winners."
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It should be "I'm applying to the Univ. " 1. " Note: I have never heard of the Paris Institute of Technology," and admissions officers at the U.
- It should be "I'm applying to the Univ.
- " 1.
- " Note: I have never heard of the Paris Institute of Technology," and admissions officers at the U.
- of Mich.
- may not have heard of it either.
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It should be "I'm applying to the Univ. of Michigan." and "would you do me a great favor and check..."
1. There should be commas: "...Their positive experience, as well as the reputation of the Institute, led me..." It should be: "...share my parents' complete satisfaction with the teaching quality here." The term "support services" is ambiguous and moreover, doesn't go together wit
1. There should be commas: "...Their positive experience, as well as the reputation of the Institute, led me..." It should be: "...share my parents' complete satisfaction with the teaching quality here." The term "support services" is ambiguous and moreover, doesn't go together wit
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