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Application for Secondary Schoool
Does anyone can help? I have written recommedation letter for my son to apply admission to a secondary school. Please help to polish the following draft,
My address
Date
Mr. Lee (The Headmaster)
School name and School address
Dear Mr. Lee,
Re : Application for Form (2009-2010)
Applicant – CHEUNG Nok Hang Enoch (ID No. Y657970(A))
We would like to apply for admission for my son to your school in 2009.
My son’s name is E and he is studying in primary 6 at .
We have great respect for the school's reputation, and we think highly of the school's facilities. Thus, we have encouraged Enoch to study here to equip himself for his future challenge.
With God’s giving, we have tried our best to raise up E and believe that good education is very essential for his long term development.
Moreover, being a ’s alumni, I love my old school so much. I really appreciate the culture of which does not only emphasis on academic performance but also whole person development. The learning atmosphere in the school also impressed me very much.
We are proud of my son who is appreciated by all of his teachers. He grows up in a liberal family which emphasize on positive and moral education. He is a joyful, aggressive and loving boy. His joyful heart and friendly attitudes have influenced all that acquainted with him. With the Grace of God, E’s talents and abilities will be fully developed through your school life.
In addition, E has good examination results and has got a overall academic ranking of Grade A in his primary school. He is creative and has actively participated in school activities especially in playing badminton. He demonstrated to be an independent and diligent learner with high self-confidence, good communication skill and easy-going character.
We highly recommend E to be a student of your school, and would be very grateful if you can favorably consider his application.
Yours sincerely
Mr. and Mrs. Cheung
My address
Date
Mr. Lee (The Headmaster)
School name and School address
Dear Mr. Lee,
Re : Application for Form (2009-2010)
Applicant – CHEUNG Nok Hang Enoch (ID No. Y657970(A))
We would like to apply for admission for my son to your school in 2009.
My son’s name is E and he is studying in primary 6 at .
We have great respect for the school's reputation, and we think highly of the school's facilities. Thus, we have encouraged Enoch to study here to equip himself for his future challenge.
With God’s giving, we have tried our best to raise up E and believe that good education is very essential for his long term development.
Moreover, being a ’s alumni, I love my old school so much. I really appreciate the culture of which does not only emphasis on academic performance but also whole person development. The learning atmosphere in the school also impressed me very much.
We are proud of my son who is appreciated by all of his teachers. He grows up in a liberal family which emphasize on positive and moral education. He is a joyful, aggressive and loving boy. His joyful heart and friendly attitudes have influenced all that acquainted with him. With the Grace of God, E’s talents and abilities will be fully developed through your school life.
In addition, E has good examination results and has got a overall academic ranking of Grade A in his primary school. He is creative and has actively participated in school activities especially in playing badminton. He demonstrated to be an independent and diligent learner with high self-confidence, good communication skill and easy-going character.
We highly recommend E to be a student of your school, and would be very grateful if you can favorably consider his application.
Yours sincerely
Mr. and Mrs. Cheung
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) We would like to apply for admission for my son to your school in 2009. My son’s name is E and he is studying in primary 6 at ABC Primary school. We have great respect for the your school's reputation, and we think highly of the your school's facilities.
- ) We would like to apply for admission for my son to your school in 2009.
- My son’s name is E and he is studying in primary 6 at ABC Primary school.
- We have great respect for the your school's reputation, and we think highly of the your school's facilities.
- Thus, we have encouraged Enoch to study here to equip himself for his future challenge s .
- ) and believe that a good education is very essential for his long term development.
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We would like to apply for admission for my son to your school in 2009.
My son’s name is E and he is studying in primary 6 at ABC Primary school.
We have great respect forthe your school's reputation, and we think highly of the your
We would like to apply for admission for my son to your school in 2009.
My son’s name is E and he is studying in primary 6 at ABC Primary school.
We have great respect for
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