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D_say Posted 18 years ago
Letter Writing

Application for Loan!!!

Would you please make correction if required in this letter ?

Subject: Request for Loan.



Dear Sir,



With due respect, I would like to inform you that I am in need of some urgent financial assistance. Please grant me $. 40,000/= (Dollars Forty thousand only) as a loan.



I would therefore request you to please consider my request sympathetically. I would be very grateful to you for your kind attention and obliged.



Thanking you,



Yours faithfully,
  

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d_say Would you please make correction if required in this letter ? Dear Sir, With due respect, I would like to inform you that I am in need of some urgent financial assistance. Please grant me $.

— Ayumiyoshi1314

  • d_say Would you please make correction if required in this letter ?
  • Dear Sir, With due respect, I would like to inform you that I am in need of some urgent financial assistance.
  • Please grant me $.
  • 40,000/= (Dollars Forty thousand only) as a loan.
  • I would therefore request you to please consider my request sympathetically.
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d_sayWould you please make correction if required in this letter ?


Dear Sir,



With due respect, I would like to inform you that I am in need of some urgent financial assistance. Please grant me $. 40,000/= (Dollars Forty thousand only) as a loan.



I would therefore request you to please consider my request sympathetically
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Is this an actual request for money or is this a writing assignment as a school project?
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Grammar GeekIs this an actual request for money or is this a writing assignment as a school project?


An actual request.[E]
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I think d_say needs to tell us that.
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Good day my sweet fellows,

Thank you all for your assistance. Please note this is a genuine case and in order to have some improvement in writing skills I have submitted my request for correction.
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Hi Ayumiyoshi1314

How come do you know that this was an actual request . Whata a prediction!

Thanks
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Hi d_say,

The reason I asked is that where I live, you don't write a letter for a loan. There are applications that include information like your income, your other current debt, and your assets.

If you were requesting money as a loan from a relative, you would say what you want to use it for and how you proposed to pay it back.

The amount you are requesting to borrow i
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Jee Jee,

Thanks for your standpoint about this letter.

Please note that I have just changed the symbol of currency which was in real Rupees instead of Dollars hence it made a confusion. I had guessed that friends of english forum will understand it easily inspite of considering the amount but now I
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Which 7 C's are you referring to?
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D_say GG is right! I completely forgot about those very important factors!Emotion: embarrassed
I am sorry.
Grammar Geek
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